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Oct 4th, 2007, 4:54pm
 
Okay, I started this topic because I'm in intro to creative writing this semester.  I thought I'd post some shorties here, either because they're interesting or because I had fun writing them and I want someone to read them besides my teacher.  I also figured this topic could be used to post anything somebody writes and thinks they did a halfway good job on.  Basically, we have a poetry section; this is a prose section.  Essays, stories, speeches, whatever.

The following are two in-class writings we have done in the past few weeks.  Both are fiction, although the first is based on a true story (rofl).  Any comments or criticisms are welcome, not only because I want to hone my skillz, but also so I don't have to look at my avatar post after post.  The prompt for this first one was to write something to parody the style of either Ernest Hemingway or Cormac McCarthy.  I picked Hemingway, and this is supposed to poke fun at his rapid-fire dialogue, like in "Hills Like White Elephants.".  
(You don't need to read much of Hemingway's to get the idea.)  Mine is supposed to be ridiculous and silly.

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Pizza

    It was noon, and the traffic roared by as a red Corolla pulled up in front of the restaurant.  A young man with blonde hair pulled into a ponytail stepped out.  He squinted in the sun as his eyes moved slowly from his car door up to the restaurant's sign.
    Noble Romans.  His stomach urged him forward and he went inside.
    He crossed the threshold and searched for a familiar face.  He didn't have to look hard in the near-empty restaurant.
    "You're early," said the Supporting Character.
    "Imagine that.  Wonders never cease," said the Protagonist, sitting down.
    "You good?"
    "Just glad to get into the air-conditioning."
    "Yeah, it's hot."
    "We should get a beer."
    "What?"
    "Nothing," said the Protagonist.  "I was making fun of Ernest Hemingway."
    "I won't even ask."
    "Good idea.  Let's go order."
    They walked up to the counter and ordered their meals.  Since it was lunchtime, the pizzas were already made, which was just fine with the two Characters.  They carried their trays over to the soda fountain, filling their white styrofoam cups that held something like a gallon of liquid.  The Protagonist sighed.  He hated styrofoam.  Shaking his head, he went to sit down.
    "What did you get?" asked the Supporting Character, falling into the opposite seat.
    "To drink or to eat?"
    "Both."
    "Sausage pizza, breadsticks, and lemonade."
    "Only losers* get sausage."
    "You're right.  You sure got me good."  The Protagonist rolled his eyes.
    "And lemonade?  You are bizarre."
    "Just shut up."  The Protagonist took a bite of his pizza to break up the rapid-fire dialogue.  The Supporting Character followed suit, and they ate in silence for a while.
    The pizza wasw hot and delicious, well-seasoned with the Protagonist's hunger.  He relished bite after bite until finally his stomach calmed down, and he slowed down to a more polite pace.  He sighed again, this time in satisfaction.  He took a long draught of lemonade, wondering as he did so if it was possible to use such a mundane experience as eating lunch for a short story.  He supposed it was.


The assignment for this next story was just to write a short fictional piece based on one of several first lines he gave us.  I picked "I kept laughing, even after I saw the gun."  I didn't know where the story would go, but I'm fairly pleased with how it turned out (even if it is a bit cliche).  This one is a bit more intense.

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    I kept laughing, even after I saw the gun.  It could not be happening, it was just too ridiculous.  My back was pressed against the rough concrete wall, and the gun shone dully in the light of the bare bulb overhead.  The gun being wielded by my best friend Dan.  Dan, who did not look like Dan anymore.  His face muscles were pulled taut, and his eyes were sunken and dark, like holes in his face.
    Like Jack, I thought.  Jack from The Nightmare Before Christmas.
    He had wanted to talk, he said.  Talk about some things that had happened.  Here, in this gloomy basement, talking had turned to yelling.  Dan-turned-Jack screamed at me, blaming every roadblock he had hit, every bad thing that had happened, on me.  The problems he was having with his job.  With his parents.  With other friends and co-workers.  I stood there, not speaking with my back against the rough wall, bewildered at this news.
    And then Dan reached the climactic word.  "Emily."  His secret crush that almost everyone knew about.  Emily, who had always been my dear friend and nothing more.  Emily, the real reason Dan wanted to confront me tonight.
    It was jealousy, and it was ludicrous.  So ludicrous that I laughed.  I laughed and laughed, even after Dan's words turned to meaningless shouting noises.  Even after he drew the gun.
    I kept laughing.
    I laughed, and I didn't know if Dan had gone insane, or if the whole world had, or just me.
    I knew I must stop.  But I could not help it.  My sides ached, I fell to the floor, and I could not stop.
    I think I loved Dan more in that moment than I had at any other point in my life.  My hot-headed friend.  My long-time buddy.  Good old Dan.  I loved him even as he flipped the safety catch.  Even as a tear crept out from one of the dark holes in his face and he whispered, "I'm sorry."  Even as his eyes shut, his tight face grew tighter, and his finger squeezed.
    They say it's best to die laughing.
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Reply #1 - Jan 2nd, 2008, 8:14pm
 
For biology class this semester, we had to keep a notebook of biology-related articles.  The Prof said that included global warming, so four of my articles were on that, seeing as it's really easy to find articles on it.  Most of you know how I am about the environment, so here's a bit of my point of view.  My perspective may come off as libby, but it is what it is.  Comments, questions, arguments are welcome.

I've posted links to the original articles, but if you don't want to read them, the portion I've written provides a summary and then my own thoughts (we had to answer "how does the article affect you?").

http://www.cnn.com/2007/TECH/science/11/26/andes.water.ap/index.html

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Aaron Riedford
Biology 100
“Andes Water Supply”

Melting glaciers means more than just the loss of a pretty view in national parks. For the people of El Alto and its sister city La Paz, Bolivia—the world’s highest capital—it means a drastic reduction in usable water. The glaciers, which have been reduced in size by global warming, provide a third of the city’s water. Similar problems are occurring in Quito, Ecuador, and in Bogota, Colombia. Not only do these cities rely on glacier-supplied water for drinking, but also for crops and hydroelectric plants. The country is suffering for the acts of the large, developed countries of the world. Bolivia, South America’s poorest country, contributes to 0.03% of the world’s CO2 emissions, compared to the U.S., which is responsible for one fourth. It is estimated that water demand will outstrip supply by 2009 unless large, water-saving projects are immediately put into action. Time is short, but these highly expensive projects are just now in the initial stages. The glacier loss will lead to other problems as well, including less rain and lowland diseases such as malaria.

Even prior to reading this article, I was aware of the melting glacier problem. I knew this could not be a good thing, but I never realized why, nor how directly glaciers could affect humans. Fresh water, while it seems plentiful enough, is not exactly easy to come by; if I am not mistaken, less than 1% of earth’s water is drinkable fresh water. Our problem in America is that we tend to think we’ll never run out of anything. The glacier problem is not affecting me directly now, but it could be a serious problem in the future. It is terrible that poor countries like Bolivia must pay for the carelessness of large, powerful countries like the U.S. Overall, the way in which this article affects me most is that I am stuck in a country filled with people who do not care. All I can do is to do my part to help the planet, but that does not seem to be enough.


http://www.cnn.com/2007/TECH/science/11/27/climate.change.ap/

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Aaron Riedford
Biology 100
“Poor Hit Hardest”

Developed nations, a leading cause of global warming, must immediately take action against it for the sake of all countries, particularly poor ones who do not possess the funding or ability. A recent report by the U.N. stated that rich nations will need to provide $86 billion per year by 2015 to strengthen vulnerable countries against global warming. $44 billion of this would go to “climate-proofing” developing nations, $40 billion to helping the poor deal with climate risks, and $2 billion to strengthening responses to natural disasters. The report also stated that increased energy efficiency, alternative fuels and even the reduction of tariffs could help the problem. Brazil’s sugar cane ethanol is more efficient than the corn ethanol of the U.S., but high tariffs (meant to protect American farmers) nearly double its price in America. Brazil’s president Luis da Silva suggested that lowering the tariff could help Brazil and mitigate climate change by reducing the amount of farmland needed—thus decreasing the amount of deforestation by burning, a leading cause of CO2 emissions.

This article throws a lot of large numbers out at the reader, which makes fixing the global climate change problem seem somewhere between difficult and impossible. Unfortunately, this impression which the article gives off is probably all too accurate. Large countries that possess the funds to fix problems are slow to react if they are not directly affected by them. The U.S., in particular, will be reluctant to either put out large amounts of money or lower tariffs. This article does not affect me on an individual level, but I am a citizen of the United States, a label which in today’s world seems to be becoming less of an impressive thing and more of a disgrace. The U.S. has a capitalist economy, which means that everyone is reluctant to put aside their gains to help the planet. Heaven forbid we should use a more efficient imported biofuel to replace imported oil—U.S. farmers might make less money.


http://www.cnn.com/2007/TECH/science/10/04/us.carbon.ap/index.html

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Aaron Riedford
Biology 100
“U.S. Carbon Emissions”

Dan Arvizu, director of the National Renewable Energy Lab of the Department of Energy, has stated that the U.S. is moving toward the regulation of carbon emissions. Arvizu said that he was “neutral as to which carbon management regulation there will be.” He also stated that the U.S. is headed in a different direction than it was a few years ago, with utility companies and U.S. oil giants wanting carbon policies. Despite the Bush administration’s adherence to a voluntary approach in controlling gas and oil, Arvizu says its position is beginning to change. Bush stated in a recent Washington conference that each nation should set targets and decide how to combat global warming without hindering economic growth. Bush also recently accepted a mandatory renewable fuel standard for vehicles, and the government will put $2 billion into alternate fuels in the next few years. Currently, transportation is responsible for 30% of carbon emissions in the U.S., whereas the global average is 20%.

I may be biased due to the fact that I am constantly frustrated with the U.S.’s environmental policies, but this article seems to say, “We need to reduce carbon emissions, but we are doing almost nothing about it.” Arvizu states in the article that there will be a carbon regulation “of some sort”—not really very specific if you ask me. What irritates me more is Bush’s statement that each nation should “combat global warming without hindering economic growth.” This seems less like a plan of action and more like an excuse for the U.S. being so much slower to fight global warming. This article should affect everyone in the country, but unfortunately it does not. In the meantime, I am trying to reduce my own carbon emissions by riding a bike or walking when possible, driving a fuel-efficient Corolla, turning off lights and electronics when not needed, and so on. If a law is passed demanding more efficient cars, it will be a small victory for those of us who actually care.
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Reply #2 - Jan 2nd, 2008, 8:22pm
 
Here's the fourth article.

http://www.cnn.com/2007/TECH/science/11/03/climate.security.ap/index.html

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Aaron Riedford
Biology 100
“Security Challenge”

Global climate change, often considered unimportant or even untrue, may actually be one the greatest national security challenges ever faced by U.S. policy makers, according to a recent study. Possible threats to national security could include dramatic population migration, wars over water and resources, and realignment of power among nations. Several scenarios have been discussed, including implications of a possible 10-degree rise in global temperature by the end of this century. At the very least, there will be more population migration, greater chance for diseases, and increased conflict in weak states—particularly in Africa, where climate change is already showing its effects. The report also stated that the global balance of power will shift as trade patterns change. Aside from the possibility of creating new conflicts, global climate changes are already intensifying current problems such as competition for water in the Middle East and monsoons in Asia.

If the U.S. is home to some of the world’s top scientists, how did it take so long for the government to realize that global warming is a legitimate problem? As a “global” issue, it seems like a far-off problem, but when it becomes “national security,” then it is a big deal. I found this article interesting because I never thought of global warming this way. All the same, it is true—global warming is already affecting the world, and could easily cause a shift in the power hierarchy of countries. This, of course, concerns U.S. leaders because they want to remain at the top of this hierarchy. The current problems caused by climate change are no small matter, either. Even Southern Indiana has already noticed effects, including a severe drought and damage to crops this past summer. This hit close to home for me, and I shudder to think about it on a global scale.
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Reply #3 - Feb 25th, 2009, 1:34am
 
I'm working on a paper, and I found a few of my writings from previous classes on turnitin.com.  Thought I'd share some of them here.  There's a few poems as well; I might post those later in the poems thread.

This was our first assignment for Writing 205, which I took a few semesters ago.  I remember this assignment was particularly difficult for me, because I'd never really written "creative non-fiction" before.  But I thought it was worth posting.

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"This I Believe"

Americans pride themselves on their so-called "rugged individualism." The secret to moving forward in life, to filling up your wallet, is not to rely on other people; on the contrary, you can find success only as a result of your own hard work and independence. If you want to climb to the top, you've got to do it alone, and you might have to step on some people along the way.

"Rugged individualism." It's a bit ridiculous. It makes me think of someone like Chuck Norris climbing an enormous rock face without help from ropes or harnesses. Of course, Chuck Norris can do that. But it's probably impossible for the rest of us. The rest of us need a bit of help.

All joking aside, I've never thought of myself as an individualist. My friends have always been very important to me. For me, nothing says "friendship" like getting pegged right in the face with a dodgeball, or going swimming at 11:00 at night. My friends have even used the syrup at IHOP as gel for a mohawk. But being with my friends is more than just a catharsis-they provide an irreplaceable support group.

Three people, in particular, have had made a permanent mark on me that is probably never going to come off. All of them were classmates of mine in high school. We chatted together before school, we tore our hair in frustration as we tried to figure out our calculus homework, and on Wednesdays we all piled into one car and took off to Noble Roman's for open campus lunch.

Such things may not seem to matter or to run very deep, but you have to look at it like a vault or a safe: it's not open very often, but there's something incredibly valuable inside nonetheless. And the outer surface does matter, because otherwise there's no way to get into it. Some people never open it because they don't know how, but I found the inside of the vault when I was a junior in high school.

It was December. The whole school was preparing for the Christmas Dance. And there were four guys--nice guys, but not really the most popular--who did not manage to get dates. Since no self-respecting guy shows up to a formal dance without a date, we had to figure out something else to do for the night. My buddy Dave offered his house as a hang-out location, so we all headed out that way.

We could have done any number of things there, but for whatever reason, we decided to sit on the back sun porch and talk. That's it. Just talk. It's not something teen-aged guys are known to do frequently, but we were never very normal, and everyone found plenty to say that night. We ranted about parents and studying, laughed at the more ridiculous comments that were made, gave each other what I'm sure we thought was good advice, and made plans for the future. That night, I knew exactly who my friends were.

That was four years ago. Today, I have a large group of friends that I spend time with nearly every weekend, usually playing Frisbee or dodgeball. But that large group hasn't replaced my small group of very close friends. This small number of people has grown to five or six, but included in those people are those high school buddies. Every once in a while, we'll have another "meeting"-sometimes with the original group, other times with an extra person or two. But every time we have such a talk, few though they are, I remember why I need friends. We all lead our own individual lives and make our own decisions, but we also support each other and make life much more bearable.

Of course, not everyone skips Christmas dance to chat with their friends, but everyone needs some kind of companionship. Families are incredibly important, but I believe that everyone needs outside friendships as well. A middle-aged accountant doesn't live as I currently do, alternating between studying and hanging out with friends as much as possible. Rather, he spends his week working, and goes home at night to his wife and kids. He (hopefully) loves his family, and if he's lucky he even loves his job, yet he always looks forward to a monthly game of poker with his buddies, or a weekend backpacking trip with an old friend. He needs their companionship.

So maybe most Americans aren't as rugged or individualistic as they'd like to think. We all need support from time to time. Everyone is impressed by Chuck Norris, but nobody really wants to be him. Most people would prefer to climb with a harness-so that even if they fall, they won't fall very far.
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